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Agnishatdal Agrahayan 1427, November 2020 critique by Labanya

Agnishatdal Agrahayan 1427 November 2020
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Critique by Labanya

Agnishatdal Agrahayan 1427, November 2020

Hi friends, let us begin!

Agrahayan issue begins with tribute to Subhaschandra Bose, one of the greatest leaders of Indian independence war.

Parasites Inc. by saptarchi: I agree with the authoress, the politicians should be legally bound to show the things they have done for their constituency before they could appear for the next election, after being elected once of course. They will have to legally explain why the promises they made were not kept. Then the public will decide whether or not it will vote for them again.

Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 8: Another fun installment of human beings being created by God and angels in a laboratory.

A secret revealed by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Sounds like a beautiful story of a father and his three songs who truly loved him.

Fractal dawn by Troy David Loy: Yet another piece on Troy’s favorite, Meera, sounds like an interesting character. Fascinating piece this time.

Heart has love… by Dom Collucci: very beautiful poem, filled with beauty and joy.

Bitter Pill dose 37 by Bitter Pill: Secular India 4: Very valid points, maybe Indian politicians can think about writing some new rules, regulations and laws with the help of actual experts to make India a true secular nation. Not merely on paper.

Pilgrim by Brendan: Fantastic piece by Brendan.

The Tilbaroo station by Pat Ritters 5: The newlyweds pick up the spot for their new home. Very beautifully written piece, you can actually see them making their plans.


Lovely greeting Sharmishtha!

5 lovely shots- these too are from Agni’s October photography loved them all.

This month Linkedin Requests shares Scott Hastle and firstgear’s social media details, will check them out!

Tilbaroo Station by Pat Ritter: Will absolutely check it out.

Pikatron by Troy David Loy sounds like a great reading material with fractals as added beauty!

SBs’ book in amazon, The spirits of darkness and light sounds like a very interesting book, absolutely worth checking out.

Star of the Month Indubala devi- She is another legend of old times, will check out her videos in YouTube.

Star of West Rock: He is fun to watch, have watched two or three comedy movies of him all were fun.

Star of east Mina Kumari- She was a priceless gem.

Youtubia-Bharat Ek Mauj- Not bad at all, we need brave people like him in larger no.

Minutes Together: playful was a fun story. Loved it.

Loved the Bengali poem and the hindi poem both. Thank you for adding my work Holud sorsher phool in your ezine Agni.

Saubhari- Interesting story, can’t say that the modern woman in me loved the story but it was interesting all the same.

TnW- Sounds like a great day.

Scaredy Stick- True again Mr. Stick, your anger is quite valid.

The sketches all through the ezine were pretty, very colourful and lovely.

That is it I guess! See you again next month, and thank you Agni/Sharmishtha for translating my works!

Yours sincerely,


A bookworm transformed into an addicted writer. I love to write and illustrate them myself. By love I mean love, no half-hearted relationship, a full-fledged, passionate love, I can’t pass two days in a stretch without writing/painting (cyber), just feel empty like lovers do when their lovers are away on a tour! Even though I am thoroughly enjoying self-publishing with amazon, but if you like my work and want to publish my works in your magazine, books or better if you want to publish a book of my works please make me very happy by contacting me. Or if you want to sell my works on commission basis only!! contact me, I will be quite relieved. Honestly writing and selling your own work is a very BORING combination. So you are more than welcome! Mail me, or go to- my blog (I have 16 blogs in wordpress, all active, some on daily basis, every one on weekly basis screaming and vowing my LOVE for writing and painting- this one is first-born, so special) (You will get the link to my remaining blogs there) or you can check out my ezines- monthly- And if you want fb you can go to my page, linkedin- my email id and I am in goodreads and completelynovel too I guess I said enough about myself, right? You will forget if I stuff too much here, so if you are curious to know this humble creature just join me in my blogs :)

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